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PARK KEEPER
Contributed by
lee954
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Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 11:30:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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They think
he's strange
because he
blows his nose
on flowers.
Copyright ©
lee954
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2007-07-29 23:30:09]
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Re: PARK KEEPER
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 03:26:19 AM AEST
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| And I thought that we all blew our noses on flowers.bern |
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Re: PARK KEEPER
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 02:52:51 PM AEST
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this is not a haiku. haikus use the syllable format of 5/7/5, meaning 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second line, and 5 in the third line.
as for the substance, this "poem" is weird and as far as i can tell doesnt have any sort of literary device, emotion, etc. the only good things i see is that you can use punctuation and capitalization correctly, which 60 percent of the posters here cant do. |
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Re: PARK KEEPER
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by Rescue on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 01:37:45 AM AEST
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Although it doesn't have to be 575, I wouldn't call this Haiku.
And very odd |
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