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Christian conundrum
Contributed by
zicky
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Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 12:06:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Someone keeps banging on our ceiling,
From them emmenates the strangest feeling,
Like their knickers are in a permenent twist
probably, seldom been kissed.
It´s a shame but there we are
I myself am all for the sun god, Ra.
Yes we pagans are cool,
Don,t bother no-one´s our golden rule
Ach! What´s a bit of human sacrifice,
The rest of the time we are nice
upstairs they worship their bums!
Now I ask you is that fun?
Copyright ©
zicky
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2007-07-29 00:06:57]
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Re: Christian conundrum
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 03:13:42 PM AEST
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| your slant rhymes at times were a bit too forced and were distracting. this piece seemed more humurous with satire and stereotypes than strictly religious. |
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Re: Christian conundrum
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by GuyJular on
Sunday, 22nd August 2010 @ 10:34:05 PM AEST
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| Pointless |
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