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Beautiful Love
Contributed by
Keilantra
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Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 03:25:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From beneath what wavering ocean
Does love rise?
Pure and beautiful
And always ready to give.
From which dove's wings
Does love fly?
Unselfish and beautiful
And always ready to give.
From who's lips do kisses come;
In who's arms do you feel warmth?
And who's company safest?
From what light does love shine?
Brightly, everlasting
And always
Ready to give.
Copyright ©
Keilantra
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2007-07-28 15:25:46]
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by wizard on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 03:56:34 PM AEST
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wow...i really like this...you did a great job... its perfect in its brevity....
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 03:56:59 PM AEST
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This is simply beautifull and so true.
Luv the graphics.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 04:07:08 PM AEST
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Yes, so true. How beautiful this is,
your expression and style, a lovely
write worthy of a read and much
praise. most lovely indeed . . .
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by Spike on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 07:09:46 PM AEST
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Kei, a quite lovely descriptive homage to love itself. A nice treat to stumble across.
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by Dom on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 11:02:02 PM AEST
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Beautiful words Kei, and they are even more powerful in their brevity.
You've kept it simple and let the underlying message shine through.
A complete pleasure to read!
I always enjoy reading your poetry,
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 01:55:10 AM AEST
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| Very beautifully expressed and powerful in it's simplicity..Russ |
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 02:19:51 AM AEST
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beautifully written!
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Beautiful Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 11:01:24 PM AEST
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yes yes, my dear kei!! Beautiful BEAUTIFUL love ..
when you find it, it is something so grand, it cannot be named,
really. I mean, all the questions that you've pondered in your
piece, really can't be answered, you know? It just IS.
Very well done work of art, my friend. It is a soft and wondrous
flow of words that comforts the weary heart ...
stunning
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