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My Symphony Of Love . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 02:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your
eyes are like a melody
that never leave's my mind,
a song as beautiful as you
again i'll never
find,
your voice is like an instrument
lamenting like a dove,
you are the insperation
for my symphony of
love.
Your
kiss convey's a harmony
as sweet as vintage
wine, the prelude that preceed's
my perfect
day,
like debusey's clare delune
your a classic in your time,
a musical rendition of
monet.
Your
hands are like a velvet glove
strumming my heart's
strings,
an orchestration made of love
in which an angel
sing's,
your a masterpeice of beauty
set to music from above,
a celestial sonata in my symphony of
love.
Ben.
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myheartsvoice
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2007-07-28 14:51:52]
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Re: My Symphony Of Love . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 02:58:17 PM AEST
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Beauytiifull ads always, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Symphony Of Love . . . Ben
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 03:28:42 PM AEST
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i love that you've taken this old idea and made it your own. excellent imagery and mood. i love all your references, being a lover of the classical myself.
great write.
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Re: My Symphony Of Love . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 01:26:06 AM AEST
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melodious love....from your note to the last line~charmingly lovingly beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Symphony Of Love . . . Ben
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 01:58:53 AM AEST
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| Love so beautifully portrayed . Awesome...Russ |
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Re: My Symphony Of Love . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 04:49:12 PM AEST
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This is beautiful Ben, such gentle metaphors and comparisons. Your love shines through more than ever!
Take care,
Dom |
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