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Many changes
Contributed by
Pain
on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 11:09:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My life is like a book
it take's time just take a look
if you think about
whats real and whats not
every thing....
your hurt and pain will stop
littel things you dont pay attention to
will make you blue
you'll feel like your sick with the flue
dont live in the past
hold on to your life now and grasp
because GOD is good
he'll make things happen for you
I love life and every body sould to
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2007-07-28 11:09:02]
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Re: Many changes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 11:29:43 AM AEST
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Good work and you are very wise.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Many changes
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by AnenaLynne on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 12:57:12 PM AEST
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short sweet and to the point lol...great job!
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Re: Many changes
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by CoalMinersWife on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 02:43:07 PM AEST
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| YES!!! Straight to the point. I love life as well and I enjoy every waking moment and everyone else should too... Awesome Job! |
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Re: Many changes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd February 2008 @ 05:59:17 PM AEST
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Life should be enjoyed. =]
It's too short not too |
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