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beauty is she

Contributed by jawdeh on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 11:22:41 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Mirror, mirror, of the wall, beauty is she above them all,

She melted the snow with her eyes of fire; I developed a sensation, a burning desire

Her smile so lovely, her lip and cheek, awoke my heart to love and seek,

A rage occurred deep inside of me, which told me she was my angel to be

I couldn’t hide or run anywhere, for I was immense with despair

Angel, angel, can I tell you how I feel, my love for you, feels really real

I know love don’t exist at first sight, but without you, my life ain’t right,

When I look at your face, my life stands still, I got a sense of relief and a big thrill

A thrill that weakens my body to the floor, every second without you is like being in a war

Her walk is like the wind, it takes my breath away; her smile is so bright, like the sun shines in May

My heart suffers when you abandon my life; it feels like I’m getting stabbed with a knife

I start to cry, the tears get stronger, my love for you can’t wait any longer

I’m in a state of ecstasy, just reflecting upon your voice, your presence around me makes me rejoice,

I wish I was the tears that touch your skin; my love for you is strong, feels like a sin

A sin of being helpless when you call my name, my brain freezes over when you do the same

If you were stuck at the stars up high, promise me you’ll never tell me bye,

I want nothing more than listen to your anguish and pain, no matter how bad it is, I’ll promise to remain’

Remain loyal to the angel of my life, while one day I hope she becomes my wife

So I send you tidings of a man who’s willing to confess, that until he met you, his life was a mess

So give me a chance to your partner until the end, for every day, my love I will send
To a woman I ain’t’ worthy of, but what can I say, without you, my life will dismay

Copyright Â© jawdeh ... [ 2007-07-27 11:22:41]
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Re: beauty is she (User Rating: 1 )
by AnenaLynne on Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 01:28:56 PM AEST
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great rythem and great message!!
~nena

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