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The Honeysuckle
Contributed by
Dom
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Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:11:03 AM in AEST
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You keep on giving, regardless,
Asking for nothing in return.
Therein lies your beauty.
*
Of course you are the honeysuckle,
Immense, alluring,
You radiate light and sweetness
As others radiate hate.
It may interest you to hear
That I am a rifling brown butterfly,
Common in these parts,
One among many.
Welcome, welcome, you draw us in.
You are not the flame for the moth,
Nor the ruby wine for the drunkard,
You are, unquestionably, the honeysuckle,
And all things mellow and benign.
We cluster round you
To bask in the ripe, golden lustre
So freely bestowed upon us.
In return we can only give our attentions,
A small cost for such rewards.
Compared, I will always be the butterfly,
A pleasing subject,
If somewhat
Lowly.
I do not expect any more.
Does the fuchsia adore the hummingbird it feeds?
Is the rose the sweetheart of the honey bee?
In short, my dear,
Can the honeysuckle love the butterfly?
It little matters. We both know
You will flourish,
And I will be amongst the crowds again
Next summer.
Author's note: Inspiration for this came both from personal experiences and from Charlotte Bronte's 'Villette', I am grateful for both, thank you.
Copyright ©
Dom
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 05:01:04 AM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful dedication write.. very powerful and expressive.. marvelous!!
rock on,
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by Ramfire on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 05:27:54 AM AEST
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Very original, keep those poetic juices flowing.
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 09:27:20 AM AEST
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Reguardless of the insperation i enjoyed reading this lovely poem, very airy and child like and yet wonderfuly romantic as well as
having a water color vividness. great write Dom . . .
thanks also 4 your comment
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 01:52:57 PM AEST
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I agree with everyone else, this is a very beautifull write.
Well done.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 03:09:10 PM AEST
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A wonderful poem with a gentle flow of words....with outpouring emotions..
Great going my friend.
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 12:37:25 AM AEST
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this poem is so truly beautiful and exquisite, my grandmother always had those and it was a delightfully magical place,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 01:00:20 AM AEST
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lovely soft write...but the butterfly is not lowly compared to the honeysuckle for they need each other
Shari |
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by Spike on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 07:13:53 PM AEST
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Dom, I kept feeling this one was going to launch into a ballad! A most enjoyable write.
S |
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 08:28:49 PM AEST
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What a lovely poem! A complete pleasure to read and re-read, my companion for the day.
Den |
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 05:23:04 AM AEST
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I'm not even sure I can comment intelligently here...
This is excellent, poet. I imagine it to be (hoping you don't mind me suggesting as much) how Robert Browning felt when he penned his first letter to Elizabeth Barrett after having read her book of poems. Ah, indeed - there is the art, but there is, too, the essence of the poet on the page! There is a rather magical thing that sometimes happens when the reader reaches through the poem and finds the poet waiting there.
I adore how you presented this. From your metaphors to the tone and style and to the fabulous essence of this - it's entirely wonderful! I wish, really, that I had written it. I celebrate you, for having done so!!
Oh and, Dom? Never once did I see a butterfly that I'd call "lowly". They're rather like people, I think - each glorious, in and of themself, regardless of their color. In my humble opinion, neither butterflies or people should forget that they were made to soar... lest they spend all their time on the ground wishing they could.
Write on, dear poet -
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 10:16:57 AM AEST
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Oh, my dearest Dom .... what a masterful beauty! Your mention of Charlotte Brontë just made this all the more
wondrous to me, (if even possible). I adore the works of the sisters, though I am more familiarized with Emily. Such
a tragic fate befell them all ...
but to this brilliant piece. I am not surprised, upon reading it, of the inspiration. It has so much quiet and
innocent romance swimming all through it! And I can't imagine you as a more lovely creature than that of the
graceful butterfly, drifting into your honeysuckle, whose heart is always smiling and open to receive greetings.
Wow. I am literally floored by this! It is incredibly unique and yet, still reminds me of something I forgot.
[as the BEST poems tend to do! ;) ]
Beautiful work, Dom, as per usual. I am growing ever fond of your poetic prowess. Relish it, my friend. Never let it die!
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by needledancing on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 10:36:34 AM AEST
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| I have always been guided by the visual presence of the butterfly. When ever it is fluttering about or symbolicly displayed I always know I am in the right place at the right time. So it is now as I read this...absolutely the right place and time. This is a truly fantastic piece of work...touching my heart with special flutter power of the most beautiful of words reflecting how all things in life need and depend on each other.Bravo.... |
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by doug on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 10:29:33 PM AEST
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It's always nice to read a poem that
is unique. Loved it perhaps because
I've felt like the lowly butterfly myself.
Lovely , Truly , Doug |
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Re: The Honeysuckle
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 02:31:19 PM AEST
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You're a very creative writer and I have come to so much enjoy your writings immensely.
A most magical and breath taking piece of poetry. Keep up the wonderful work my dear poet friend. It's always a pleasure stopping by your pages~
huge hugs from your fan,
dreamer
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