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I wish i were the Moon
Contributed by
sunflower
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Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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midnight claims the sky
and i wish i was the moon tonight,
bestowed in a halo of glittering starlight,
moving across the sparkling black sea
sleeping beneath me,
pouring between the ghostlike trees,
in a golden stream,
to warm the bittercold night,
a beacon of light on the deer's path
as they venture out past darkness,
watching over the hopeless romantics
that wait for slumber to embrace their emptiness,
to gather their hearts and wishes,
transform their tears and fears,and
return to them the faith and love,
that they surrender nightly in dreams,
for just one night,
to give freely,that which i seek,
without hesitation, fear, or doubt,
for the whole world below
to resonate in my love
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sunflower
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2003-03-02 17:00:00]
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by spooky on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:39:32 PM AEST
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| a very beautiful message,,the thoughts of being the moon and hopeing for one love,,beautiful,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 05:50:29 AM AEST
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| I love poems about the moon ... this is a delightful poem .. you always portray such beautiful images. |
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 10:43:02 PM AEST
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nice poem
lovely words
great imagery
well done
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:10:16 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful expression of unconditional love, as i see it, love it:) |
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:00:50 PM AEST
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| "that they surrender nightly in dreams" i love that line...well writen...loved it |
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by Jaima on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:23:27 AM AEST
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bestowed in a halo of glittering starlight,
moving across the sparkling black sea
sleeping beneath me,
i really like your poem, but i really like this part the best..well done..*smiles* |
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Re: I wish i were the Moon
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 05:43:27 PM AEST
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| Awwwww!!!!!! This was the best poem I've read today! So sweet and loving! Full of emotions mostly love and care. Such a loving description of the moon and your emotions, such good will!! I'm really impressed and the "to resonate in my love" piece was truely a master piece!!! :) |
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