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BACK IN THOSE DAYS

Contributed by veenu on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 01:09:45 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems




i am a broken branch,
my tree shed me away,
back in those days,
light and rays,
a sweet home near to me where my tree stand still on the way,
there live mom and dad,
and a funny boy they had,
as we grow and winter blow,
that boy fall in love with a girl about her i dont know,
both love each other so much,
as i hear them here together,
there laughter and there sound was all around and the gloomy weather,
my dear tree become emotional ,
showing bud of blossom,
in offseason,
somehow there love that was spoken,
and there voice that i hear in open,
that voice lost in woods,
and love break with the words unspoken,
that boy sit here underneath my tree so upset,
that my wooden heart come to rest,
and my tree shed me as he come to know that my wooden heart is now dead,

as the sun (in winter)surround by cloud ,
my tree shed the leaf they fall all around,

i pray to almighty to let there love fly free,
as summer come's after winter,
as new leaf come on my tree,

may! they come here together and prove the love that we praise,
and my dear tree feel back in those days...






Copyright © veenu ... [ 2007-07-27 01:09:45]
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Re: BACK IN THOSE DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 03:13:50 PM AEST
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A wonderful poem with perfect flow of words...I loved the way you had brought all this together.

hope to read more of your work my friend.

FRANCO.


Re: BACK IN THOSE DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 12:23:13 PM AEST
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this is an awesome, powerfull write.
huggs,
emy


Re: BACK IN THOSE DAYS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th February 2008 @ 01:18:28 AM AEST
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A truly beautiful poem, nastalgic to the core,
lovely visions it conveyed while i was reading it . . .



Ben




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