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The Nighttime Lover
Contributed by
SugimotoYouki
on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 10:59:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How can I turn away my eyes
From this face so beautiful
Just like the bright and golden sun
Enlightening this cold, wide world
In which you refuse to see me
At times I feel just like a ghost
Cause you seem to walk right through me
Even though I hold on so desperately
I always fail to reach you
As if I just wasn't there
Though when the sun has set
Your eyes suddenly fly to me
Their color as dark as night
Sparkling like a newborn star
And passion burning like the morning sun
No word might pass your lips
But your hands seem to speak your heart
As we lay there, right under the stars
You hold me tightly in your arms
Just as if you're never letting go
Should I ever ask you
What kind of game we play
You pretend there's nothing to know
What do I even expect from you
Well, nothing, dear, just some honesty
Shout out how you love to be so alone
Chase me away with your icy words
Act as heartless as you want
I might even believe every bit of it
If you could only look me in the eye...
Copyright ©
SugimotoYouki
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2007-07-26 22:59:36]
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Re: The Nighttime Lover
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by Dom on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 11:55:27 PM AEST
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Nice write, a very emotional journey, I hadn't expected it to end the way it did.
There is some lovely imagery in here.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: The Nighttime Lover
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by GuyJular on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 10:20:53 AM AEST
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| First of all, great writing, it's passionate and symbolic, I really like it. Second of all tell that b**ch to be in a relationship with u or no more nighttime sex, ur not playing her games anymore. U don't want to be played like a chump do u? |
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