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Wish To Be There
Contributed by
zenith66
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Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 11:48:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The wisps of earths tremendous cloud
Like mountainous fingers stretched from sky too ground,
When all life’s tiring deeds are done I'll sit there,
Somewhere beyond the end of sea,
At earths edge alone….
Where marram grass grows wildly on the dunes,
And tickled by the light of eventide,
The mighty ocean….playfull as a child
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Re: Wish To Be There
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by brew on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 12:01:54 PM AEST
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YES....free flowing,,,,,Always what i think writes should be like.they DO not have to rhyme......its the heart that makes us.write.......do flow...........
brew~ |
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Re: Wish To Be There
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by jingles on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 04:00:35 AM AEST
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some of the best poems come from the moment. to much thinking can complicate it. its a wonderful poem.
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Re: Wish To Be There
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd March 2008 @ 03:16:55 AM AEST
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Decided to search the back poems of your page and came across this one.
Wow, zenith, there is a calm and quietly serene feel to this, even with the
references to mountains, the earth's edge and the end of the sea. You've
a wealth of imagery in such a short piece! Bravo poet!
A very enjoyable write .. placed me right there in the middle of it all.
~Breezy |
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