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My Beloved Superstar
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:40:01 AM in AEST
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Your eyes shines even in the dark
Your smile brings sunshine to my life
Your voice is like melody to my ears
I just love the way you talk
And I could not explain the reason
Why I love the way you laugh
It feels like the angels are here whenever I see you
And the world seems o be a better place
With your presence in it
And in my own, small world
It is all lit up because you are shining in it
My super star, my beloved superstar
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funnyface09
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2007-07-25 02:40:01]
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Re: My Beloved Superstar
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 03:28:59 AM AEST
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So honest and so beautiful and spoken in a
manner that can only be called so innocent and there for, so true of heart. Very lovely indeed.
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Re: My Beloved Superstar
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 03:37:16 AM AEST
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this is a very nicely written dedication.. I love the flow.. its so powerful for being a shorter write and beautifully expressed.. great job
rock on
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