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Drunk
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 06:44:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Passed out Drunk on the bathroom floor
Could be wasted, could be more
Wake up sick with my Breath full of liquor
Move too fast and I keep getting sicker
Close my eyes and take a deep breath
Knealing over the toilet, this hangover's like death
All alone on the bathroom floor
Misguided thoughts telling me I'm a Whore
My head is a blur and I can't see right
I don't even know who I did last night
Hair's all tossled and makeup's smudged
Drunk as hell and I'm being judged
My bra and panties thrown to the side
Tear stains on my face so I know I've cried
A bottle of beer tipped over on the rug
This lifestyle's an addiction, almost like a drug
Jump in the shower still wearing my shirt
I want to scrub my guilt away as if it were dirt
The World is spinning as if I were high
I can't feel the water, I'm that numb inside
Passed out drunk on the bathroom floor
Could be hammered, probobly more...
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Inevitable
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Re: Drunk
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 07:46:20 AM AEST
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This was graphic in detail to say the least.DOesnt soung like a fun night out either. Nicely done. Hope all is better now.
Yes alcohol is an addiction and yes it is a drug.....
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Re: Drunk
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by brew on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 12:36:12 PM AEST
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Hurt, fear and ..........why? You are a human and worth more, so Stop..dont feel broke or shame....you are just as well as anyone who is alive...Quit feeiling self pity and get going,,,,,Yes i feel your hurt, but stand proud,,,,,You have what ever it is to be a person........PERIOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smile
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Re: Drunk
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by one-curly-fry on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 08:16:27 PM AEST
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Wow; painful poem.. Horrible to admit, but I can relate. I went through a terrible patch over 2007-08. Just reading brought back the nausea. And you're right; the lifestyle is addictive.
You know your reading a good poem when in a short amount of words your emotionally moved.
Great write!
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