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One Day
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 02:39:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Looking for you
waiting with baited breath
Skin so pale
Soaked in lies and death
Glimpses of you
with blood from your eyes
Twisted little girl
I hear your lies
Ugly and ruined
with deceitful bones
Model material
But you're all alone
No one wants your falsities
No not really at all
Walking on earth, twisted sister
I'm waiting till you fall
Nasty notes
Accusations so unkind
Anger has filled me
and twisted this mind
One day I shall find you
One day I'll be there
Grab your tresses in my hands
Pull back that long hair
Your white neck shall glisten
in the shining sunlight
Jugular pumping
the angle is just right
I'll lay my blade gently
upon your craned neck
Slice ever so deeply
Your blood I beck
Dripping down gracefully
Warm on my hands
Strong smell of iron
Seeps into my land
7-20-07
My muse.....well... she knows who she is. *smiles deviously*
Laura Howell Horner
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Re: One Day
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 03:33:14 AM AEST
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Holy heck sis!
whew boy howdy this is dark at its best!
who prey tale did this to you to get you smokin so?? I got a club handy.......
This write rocks you do well with the touch of darkness
Michelle |
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Re: One Day
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 03:42:48 AM AEST
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Hmm dark, I see a different side to you!
You're right we all have these thoughts sometimes, prompted in a rush of hatred, and they are all but extinguisged the next second. So, yes, to act on them is something completely separate from having the thoughts in the first place.
Good write,
Dom |
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Re: One Day
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 04:29:50 AM AEST
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yuesh!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: One Day
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 04:41:47 AM AEST
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there is a little darkness in all of us and you have put into words splendidly...great write
Shari
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Re: One Day
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 05:23:02 AM AEST
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| those old words come flashing back..Got to Sleep sometime" woo-hoo! never seen this side of you.. great work. Vincent |
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Re: One Day
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 09:24:59 AM AEST
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wow this is intense and very well done.. marvelous!! its different than your usual stuff but its awesome!! great job!!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: One Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 10:00:52 PM AEST
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| Great write, good strong poem. I think that at some time or another we all have such thoughts and in our poems we write the nastiness out of our systems. Top Marks from bern |
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Re: One Day
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 04:00:32 AM AEST
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Your first mistake my Sister Laura, never let thyne intended vitcum know you know who they are. This is exquisit, your marcarbe side
is long overdue, stunning write and rightfully so, well placed intenttions . . .
((((peace2 thee my hippie sister))))
Ben |
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Re: One Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 09:45:08 AM AEST
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Good gracious laura!!! (lol)
wow! ... I don't think I've seen this side of you, but DAMN sis, you do dark oh so well, (maybe a little TOO well .. lol)
Seriously though, wow! I am in a state of shock. This was written with such a command of the darker side of humans
that we all like to deny exists in ourselves. wow again! Sorry for the repetition, but that is the only interjection that I
seem capable of uttering at the moment.
I loved this. And I know, (God, now I know!) it feels good to get this crap off your chest.
*hugs*
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Re: One Day
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 1st August 2007 @ 02:12:47 AM AEST
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This was intense and amazing.. Dark yet a poetic master piece.. Amazing Laura..
Take care
Christina |
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