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No Sacrifice no Victory

Contributed by Angivel on Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 08:00:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Once long ago - I came to know
The song of snow sang from below

I chose for me - said nevermore
I closed and thigtly locked the door

The tears are shed - I wish to die
Those years are dead and I know why

I am yours but you're not mine - It is sad I know-so sad I know
Pain on course through space and time - never stops to grow-never stops to grow

There's no one else - it's like before
I threw myself down on the floor

Can't scream your name - trapped in a game
It's seems a shame no one's to blame

See you and I - we'll never be
We drew a line both you and me

No more dreams and no more sleep - I must disappear-must disappear
For now it seems I made you weep - Please forgive me dear-forgive me dear

Such Heartless war - and furthermore
I guess for me to be no more

In Hell I freeze - confined by you
Just Tell me please what I should do

From above the rain - I do proclaim
That Love and pain is all the same

The frozen Heart inside of me - is about to break-about to break
´Cause you and I can never be - now I am awake-at last awake




Copyright © Angivel ... [ 2007-07-23 20:00:11]
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Re: No Sacrifice no Victory (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 07:53:33 AM AEST
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A beauty of a write, I enjoyed this.The meter rhyme flow all super! Loved the ending.

Michelle




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