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Is life Fair
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 11:35:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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is life fair when you lose
someone precious to you
how can you live
when your role model
the man i idolized
as a super hero
departs many years ago
do i deserve misery
when a butterfly, flies by
shine brights, widens my eyes
and then just dies
the lives that are taken
is it a signal, that god does not like me
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2007-07-23 11:35:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Is life Fair
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 11:46:49 PM AEST (User
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Life is what we make it. Fair or unfair do not come into it.The surest thing about life is that death follows. Learn to accept this and the battle is halfways won. I will not comment and further on this poem but I will look at your works in the future to see whether this has done anything to help- Keep smiling from bern |
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