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Veridicality
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:58:04 PM in AEST
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They will come.
Lovelorn and dusty brained –
their feathers bent,
their eyes wide…
carried forth in the arms
of a inescapable melody;
wanting so to fly.
They will come
quivering and quiet -
like moths to a flame,
drawn by the light,
warmed by the same.
One by one
falling to the earth
before him;
exigent and
in awe.
Yes…
when he calls them-
they will come
bearing the burden
of tomorrow’s memories,
never to be the same.
And there,
with the lot of them
- forever -
he shall remain.
Copyright ©
Silent-No-More
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2007-07-21 15:58:04]
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Re: Veridicality
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 05:17:16 PM AEST
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| This has a very magnificent feel to it. It strikes out with a sort of importance. |
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Re: Veridicality
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by Dom on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 06:00:41 PM AEST
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Poignant and beautiful imagery, its difficult to pick out any particular favourite parts, but I adore the first stanza!
Stunning poem,
Dom |
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Re: Veridicality
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by physcoquack on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:38:54 AM AEST
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| it seems you took along time to make it ryme but all the while you seem to have an urgency though the poem |
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Re: Veridicality
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 10:44:39 AM AEST
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Oh my my my! Snems ... this is amazing to me, if only for the mystery found within the words.
There is also a kind of soft magic floating inside every line. I cannot pretend to know who
it is you speak of, and are giving tribute to, but I like that you have done so in such a
beautifully poetic way. (Gives us greedy readers the chance to bask in the glory of it)
gosh .. I know I mentioned magic earlier .. but wow. I just re-read this and it bears
mentioning again. It really has a magical feel to it that I adore.
This may not be as intended, but this reader found a soft and quite familiar solace
in here. I am comfortable enough to curl up and fall asleep right here between the
words ...
perfectly written, as always ~
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Veridicality
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 12:28:18 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, ive read it several times and love it more each time, exquisite writing,
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: Veridicality
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 02:33:16 PM AEST
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interesting supernatural write? i dont know, but the beggining was alluring adn teh end was great. once again snem, humbled i am. great write.
~kei |
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Re: Veridicality
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 03:24:41 PM AEST
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| I like the way this flows |
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Re: Veridicality
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by hot-shot on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 05:09:32 PM AEST
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| nice piece of work |
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