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Sleep
Contributed by
SftTailRider_06
on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:23:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I'm feeling blue ,
Can I think of you?
I love you honest I do
Sleep is scrace without you,
All I can do is think of you.
Night is near so I'll have to close
With care read each first word on each line,
You will then know what's on my mind.
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... [
2007-07-21 15:23:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sleep
(User Rating: 1 ) by physcoquack on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 04:50:52 AM AEST (User
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great job that last line writen with the first words makes a lasting impression |
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