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This Side Of The Flame
Contributed by
dark_fighter_chick
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Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 04:11:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Love is not a game; it’s a death sentience
It's the reason you breath, and at the same time bleed
It's the rush you get when you know you've found heaven
Yet it’s the same reason you want to die
Love steals your will to live
It crushes you every dream
Rips apart you soul
Stomps on you heart
Beats at your brain
It makes you ponder the remains of your sanity
It sets your world afire, yet you burn in its every desire
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2007-07-21 04:11:02]
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Re: This Side Of The Flame
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 11:11:59 AM AEST
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i like the rhythm, more so at the end.
and, no one ever really thinks of love this way...but in a way, i guess you're right. most would probably disagree, that love is only good...and i guess it's really more heartbreak that does all this damage, but where would heartbreak be without it's love?
very excellant write - i enjoyed it.
- Bethani - |
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Re: This Side Of The Flame
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 01:48:50 AM AEST
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| I guess that how life works we all go through that.Its one of those thing you call the meaning of life.anyways you did very well on this.take care |
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