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Sometimes I Wonder
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 12:54:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I easily walk alone
with the strength I have shown
Through these dark times
Full of romantic crimes
From women caught in a cheat
to those more discreet
To men with heavy hands
Covering these lands
Those walking alone
Don't make themselves prone
to such great attacks
Yet still we can't relax
Even though we know the chance
We get jealous watching others dance
The warm smiles and the soft caress
Bring up urges too hard to suppress
Urges that pull at our power
Urges that quickly devour
Our coveted strength reserve
Making us think of what we deserve
Someone to let inside our defenses
Someone to set fire to our senses
Making us burn to feel their love
Someone we can take care of
With thoughts like this I began to wonder
Has my courage been torn asunder
Is walking alone really the right thing?
Or am I left ignorance's king...
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Re: Sometimes I Wonder
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 01:12:08 PM AEST
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nice write! i like the way this flowed along, well structured
"Even though we know the chance
We get jealous watching others dance
The warm smiles and the soft caress
Bring up urges too hard to suppress"
i really liked these lines :) great job |
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Re: Sometimes I Wonder
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 06:39:09 AM AEST
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wondering can be a frutiful yet bad think to do, as it leaves thoughts in ones mind. sometimes not good ones. loved this write of expression, flowed very well. i have read many writes today and this one is a favourite so far.
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