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All but a cell phone away
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 04:04:26 PM in AEST
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March with raised arms and twisted mind
something this way comes
like a the end of vinyl we are only circling
nothing new
and people die for a cause not there own
we dance and drink
and think this is all but a humanity crime
but then each of us all have our owns spoons
and only the poor really die
that is why its so easy to forget our neighbor
when we all lose friendly smiles to stranger
and simple hello's
then we dance and we drink
while we forget the pain we caused
its easy as an excuse
then we dance and we drink
then wake with headphones in our ears
as we walk staring at the street
all but a cell phone away
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2007-07-19 16:04:26]
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Re: All but a cell phone away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 01:27:36 AM AEST
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wow this makes total sense and its extremely powerful.. this has great imagery too.. awesome job here.. thanks for sharing
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: All but a cell phone away
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 03:52:50 AM AEST
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My dear brother, you have been on a powerful roll of late...pumping out some very impressive writes. This is another excellent piece.
Thank you for sharing. I agree with you on so many of these subjects you present on our world and it's current situation.
Much peace, my friend,
Laura |
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