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Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
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Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 08:28:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Once upon a moment
i kissed you for an hour
your beauty never left my mind
alone,
as pretty as a picture as fragile as a flower
as rare as the rosetta
stone.
Once upon a moment
you said hello to me looking from the corner
of your eye, what was i to say as you took my breath away
your voice was like a babie's
lullaby.
Once upon a passion
we touched each others soul
and made a solem promise
together we'd grow
old,
that every star we wished upon
would be a wish come true
for loving you has gone beyond what even dreams
can do.
Yes
once upon moment
love caught me by surprise
before i knew what happened
you were looking in my eyes,
'twas in that very moment
i knew what was to
come
'tis now a life time later still i love you
and then
some.
Ben
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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 09:07:37 AM AEST
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I love this...
"Once upon a moment
i kissed you for an hour"~you
These are the kind of kisses that explore the soul...
Simply wondrous!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~mecavegirl...ugh
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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:41:59 PM AEST
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your love for her shines here, and i love the and then some adds a big hug to the poem:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 06:44:44 PM AEST
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I love all the comparisons in this, to the Rosetta stone and to a flower, just enhancing the strength and appreciation in your love.
And that ending, I can see it being said with a cheeky yet endearing smile. Certainly made me smile, to know that all can be given, but this does not mean that there is nothing left to give.
Lovely!
Dom |
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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 04:42:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful...as always, my brother. Your love is a light that never stops shining.
Thank you for sharing.
Peace, love and hugs,
Hippie Sis |
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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
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by tifrob on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 04:16:29 PM AEST
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Now, that's a love poem. A beautiful poem. "Once Upon A Moment..." And the reader knows that, that moment lasted a lifetime.
J~ |
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Re: Once Upon A Moment . . . Ben
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 09:27:35 AM AEST
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Ben I never ever tire from reading your wonderful romantic poetry my dear friend. Always so beautiful, uplifting & inspiring. Each word penned so beautifully you melt the readers heart and for this reader you give hope that "true love" really does exist.
Lovely and heart warming. Thanks for sharing it with us.
many hugs ur fan/friend,
dreamer |
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