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sad
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:45:37 AM in AEST
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Life has its ups and downs.
I have a sad life.
I was told that I might have lung disease.
I pray that I dont.
I want all who reads this. this is a reminder of who smoke cigarettes they will soon are later get you.
I know this doesnt sound like a poem but its just something that i had to write about.
I will never be the same again because of my damage lung .
iT IS MY BEHIND MY HEART AND IF I HAVE LUNG DISEASE THEY MIGHT HAVE TO TAKE IT OUT,
IT DOESNT PAY TO SMOKE I KNOW BECAUSE I USED TO BE A BAD SMOKER AND NOW I DONT SMOKE ANYMOR.
Jesus Christ gave me a second chance at life.
There isnt much i can do it brings me down i get tired easy,
i am not telling anyone to stop smoking i mean it is your choice to smoke.
but they will kill you,,
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Re: sad
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:56:26 AM AEST
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wow this is ironic you write this cuz im a smoker also and i just quit its day 2 and this helps me to continue to really not smoke. even though its very hard.. thanks for caring.. maybe you can help us people who like to smoke out there and they will listen.. that is so true.
I hope you are ok though I will keep you in my prayers!! GOd bless
Rock on,
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Re: sad
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 03:07:11 AM AEST
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good for you guys
thanks for sharing
good write |
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Re: sad
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 01:13:36 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for your pain i just quit well in june it's been 2 months i've gone with out a cigar
hope thign's get better for you. thank you also for your read and comment on my poem . . .
Ben |
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