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SUMMER and RAIN
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:06:04 AM in AEST
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NaturePoetry
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falling leaves upon the trees
grass which is greener than green
beautiful flowers that allow nectar to release
for the bees who linger upon the tips
humid air which fills the skies
leaving one knowing summers near
giving pleasure of taking in heat filled moments
with a summer sprinkle lingering near by
soon to capture the sun filled skies:with darkness
smell of approaching thunderstorms
sounds of booming roar
one sees a hot sunny morn
now is a afternoon of thunder
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:11:52 AM AEST
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| Your love of nature and its flows of weather changes sings like harps and violins in the background. Wonderful write. |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by Adreana on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:46:01 AM AEST
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| Nature's symphony. Fabulous! |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:49:21 AM AEST
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Oh Dayna what a BEAUTIFUL write!!!
This filled me with the most wonderful nostalgia. A remembrance
of being a child during those carefree days of summer. … and how
quickly a hot, sticky day could turn into a dark thunderous one!
WOW! I LOVE this!
There are so many lovely images in this, hun. It is truly breathtaking.
Gorgeous piece, my sweet friend. :)
~Breezy
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 01:51:45 AM AEST
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this is awesome imagery here.. I love the ending.. its very well done.
rock on,
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:32:59 AM AEST
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| You have the right idea, Nature is at its best when one can look back and write about it. Great Poem top marks from bern. |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 02:45:49 AM AEST
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truly beautiful and sooo peaceful:)
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 10:38:03 AM AEST
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I love summer rains....the wonderful scents it can bring...thanks for sharing such beauty, my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by Dom on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 06:58:34 PM AEST
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I love nature poetry, and this was a wonderful read!
Its brimming with the most beautiful and evocative imagery, if I close my eyes I could be there.
Simply lovely!
Dom |
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Re: SUMMER and RAIN
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 12:42:23 PM AEST
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I also have a knack for "smelling" oncoming rain..(or snow)..
it's almost as if the pavement were on fire..lol
(my singular interpretation..lol)
..hope this finds you well-
wonderful work my friend~
B |
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