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A Day Apart
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
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I don't know who I cried for more,
the both of you so full of life,
a day apart though, I just don't understand sometimes,
how the cloud of death,
leaves nothing but oozing cries,
sometimes its seems so unreal,
and at times I've hoped it was only a bad dream,
but it is real,
all these sorrows, in such a short time,
you both died exactly a day apart,
same time and all,
exactly the same time,
nine twenty one in the morning,
I wonder what God was thinking at times,
he now has two angels,
I know thats what I saw, when I looked at you, both,
and those smiles,
they've never been forgotten,
thats something I'll always have,
within my heart,
thats probably what keeps me going,
you left a great song for us,
lovely memories, and a trail of hope,
I always see you,
your pictures are framed in my heart,
and as this second year goes by without the both of you,
I have so much to be thankful for,
knowing you in life,
was a great cherished gift,
a treasure of dignity,
thats how beautiful you both were,
until we meet,
I'll keep watching the rays,
that glow from the sun,
its the road to heaven,
I know that,
because its real,
just like the love we had,
seven more days to go,
seven more smiles,
seven more miles,
the pack we had,
you both are sooo ..... loved,
its something that burns inside me,
..... two love ones gone,
and I still feel lost!
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2003-03-02 03:00:00]
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Re: A Day Apart
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by LadyDama on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 04:07:36 AM AEST
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| Valerie... i have no idea how you manage to stay so strong for those around you, but i do know one thing... the events of your life and your experiences flow through your poetry and reach out to your readers... my blessings to you and your angels... |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by kathy on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 04:27:37 AM AEST
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Valerie,
Your poem touched my soul. A beautiful expression of your very sad and personal experience . God bless you and your angels.
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Re: A Day Apart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 04:34:11 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful tribute and write...i am sure they are watching over you
Shari |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 06:34:54 AM AEST
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| You are so lucky to have Nathan to help you through this difficult time with his beautiful way of looking at life ... this is such an emotional poem - words are really hard to come by when such heartache is expressed ... I'm so sorry for your loss ... Jan |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:22:48 AM AEST
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Valerie this touched me in so many ways,I said before your heart is huge! A true Angel!
Not many could carry all you have on your shoulders & make it! I am inspired by your strength!God bless you & I will be praying too!
Christina |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:59:45 AM AEST
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Sometimes words are so inadequate, at least mine are. So frustrating to be able to use words to express my feelings on most everything and yet when I search for real words of comfort, of substance to help a friend they seem so hollow and vain.
As all have said before me- They are watching over you. We all care. God give you comfort maam. |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 02:49:59 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful... |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by Tanna on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:50:52 AM AEST
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To read your poems allows a very indepth look at your life, and my God, you are one STRONG woman! I wish nothing but the best for you.
I hope you continue to write & post, as your words are beautiful and stirring.
Nathan has a very unique outlook on life. I think he has a lot to teach us :)
Take care and God bless!
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Re: A Day Apart
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 06:18:20 PM AEST
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| This is a touching piece of art, written by a woman I can tell has a huge loving heart. This touched my heart more than you will know. You do have those sweet angels watching over you every minute. Bless you!!! |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:24:50 PM AEST
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You are indeed a remarkable person Val, the more I read of your life in your formidable
poems (beautiful too but with great inner fortitude), the more I realise what a fortunate life I've had.
Bob |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 04:41:31 PM AEST
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| love never dies nor does the love we feel for those passed on, this is a beautiful touching poem |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 07:29:30 PM AEST
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| big hugs and love (((((valerie))))), ever nessa |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 01:05:13 PM AEST
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| I haven't heard such a touching poem like this in a long time. Sorry for the losses. I had also lost someone dear to my heart, who is my mother, I didn't know how to really talk about it so I wrote her a poem. Take Care you will make it! Think of it This way, you now have 2 more Guardian angel's to protect you in life!!! |
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Re: A Day Apart
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 3rd May 2003 @ 06:24:14 PM AEST
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| Dear Valerie, although you say it was two years ago, I wish you my condolences. I still occassionally have tears for my father who died in 1974. I want to tell you that in a way you are fortunate although you've had tragedy to deal with, because, it seems to me that you understand something that some of us don't. You fully live life and know what is of value. Friend Bizzy |
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