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Burnt Embers Of Lust
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 11:05:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whispers ........so soft soothing every inch to calm
Touch .... gentle in your hash nature
Passion ...cold in your touch but smooth on my flesh
You call my name in the dark you caress me to wake
you hold me with gentle wet kisses longing for the night not to end
then in your arms we make love and i hear the oceans calm for that time
Turmoil .....the hidden mistress with bouts of hidden rage
Longing ....of the family you crave with hidden lust
Confusion ...of the love that is shown and the meaning inside
you push me away with fits of spite in the dark
our passion to much to hold
you walk away with no ring for your love hidden meaning with every breath
i whisper to you and call your name in the dark
you touch me with wet eyes and sullen tongue
we make love again as passion flares
and we sleep
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lostrelic
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2007-07-18 11:05:38]
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Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 11:37:09 AM AEST
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Wow Relic,
Holy crap...this is incredibly beautiful...with tones of sadness woven in. That last stanza is simply incredible. Wow again.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:19:34 PM AEST
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hemmmm is it me or is it gettin hot in here?
it gettin hot in here
I loved this
Michelle |
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Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:22:48 PM AEST
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wow very intense and indepth.. great job on this.. its just amazingly written..
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Burnt Embers Of Lust
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:25:33 PM AEST
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aww so romantic and lovely :)
very nicely done |
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