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Forever Lost in the Endless Abyss of the World
Contributed by
aloneinthememory
on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 07:07:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im searching my ipod for a single song that doesnt remind me of you.
So far Ive failed. I dont know how Ill survive without you.
I fell in love after this year ended. Without love I dont know...
Im sure Ill make it, but I just wish I knew for sure.
How do you feel about me? Do I make your heart skip a beat?
Do you think about me at all, I wish you did 'cause boy-
youre always on my mind. day and night.
every song, every place, every moment
reminds me of you.
how can you leave so simply, so easily?
How can you push me from your mind so quickly?
It will kill me but I have to do the same, is it causing you any pain?
That kiss we shared, that wonderful kiss
I wish for that single moment to return, for me to relive
It never will, I wish only that it would, but wishing is exactly that.
I have no shooting stars or birthday candles to wish upon
my wish is only sent out into the world to evaporate into atmosphere,
into a whispering wind
forever lost in the endless abyss of the
world.
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aloneinthememory
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2007-07-18 07:07:36]
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Re: Forever Lost in the Endless Abyss of the World
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by lieinruin on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 07:18:23 AM AEST
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In the words of Borat. "Very Nice".
Good write, and it was creative, and almost cliche, but not. And I'm a sucker for that kinda stuff :) nice write |
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Re: Forever Lost in the Endless Abyss of the World
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 08:28:26 AM AEST
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this isn't too bad.. its expressed well.
Rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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