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Have Wheels...
Contributed by
Dom
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Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 05:22:21 AM in AEST
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The air holds an indefinable promise.
You can’t help but flick your gaze
Towards a horizon where dew gilds the grass,
And further out ferries drift ethereally
In a summer morning’s haze.
It can almost be tasted on the wind,
Sweetness that lingers on your tongue.
Under my feet the hot tarmac hums
Of places and wheels and dog-eared maps,
All the roads chorusing.
I like this air.
It is a knife’s edge
Between the descent and the return,
An intake of breath before the slow exhalation.
I am gloriously aware of the seconds
As the wheels slot with the road like cogs
Copyright ©
Dom
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 05:59:50 AM AEST
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wow---Great visuals with this!!
There's an anticipation and a relaxation rolled together uniquely, a very pleasing blend! |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 06:37:59 AM AEST
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wonderful visual...
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 08:21:55 AM AEST
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hmmmmm Dom .. sounds like vacation or bust! lol
perfect imagery here and such a delightfully poetic way
to piece them together. :)
it almost has a nostalgic feel to it. I am in reminiscence of
bygone summer days of childhood and all the smells that
caught my nose by surprise .... funny how one smell can
bring back a flood of memories ~
Wow. Thanks for the walk down nostalgia lane :D
~Breezy |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 10:02:00 AM AEST
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I'm w/ Jecks insofar as, 'Anticipation', was the common denominator
in my own thoughts pertaining to this write & I more than loved this
reminder of my own roadtrippin' daze...er, um, I
meant, 'days', teehee...
"Of places and wheels and dog-eared maps,
All the roads chorusing."~you
but, in all seriousness I really did enjoy this descriptive expression
Right on, write on...
BigLoveMuchPeace
~ misfitme |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 11:45:41 AM AEST
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Wow, Dom~
I absolutely love this write. Oh dear friend I can picture it all inside my head. Breezstar sums it all up for me.
Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us dearest Dom. I apologize for not been around for awhile. Been insanely busy! I'll be sure to catch up on your sensational poetry. Keep up the awesome work~
a huge fan,
sue m |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 12:38:20 PM AEST
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Lol i agree with everyone else here
good write :) |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:43:51 AM AEST
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| well..I can`t read to much of this, I`m a gypsy at heart would put me between the signs" no doubt...you are always a pleasure to read. Vincent |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 07:01:23 AM AEST
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the images here are so excellent-this poem breathes -which to me is of only the best, pulling me into its reality......thank you for transporting me elsewhere, loved it:)
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 10:19:31 PM AEST
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This has a beautiful balance to it and i could feel as well as see what your describing in it.
from the air to the tarmac. Very summerish
very nice writting Dom.
Ben |
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Re: Have Wheels...
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 10:53:26 PM AEST
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A perfect sharing of a moment truly savoured. Scenic, aromatic,even audio comes through in this perfect piece.
Of places and wheels and dog-eared maps,
I can really relate to this line esp. Have a few of those dog eared maps myself. |
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