|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Museum of Time
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 10:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
Portraits of truth
Museum of time
Caught in essence
Framed every crime
Words used as swords
Deeds left undone
Revenge plated out
Songs left unsung
Hope also exhibited
Good acts of charity
Smiles collected
However their brevity
Laughter and tears
Joy and sorrow
All of our todays
And many tomorrows
Someday we will stroll
Through the corridors
I hope mine is filled with good
How about yours?
Copyright ©
NoSaint
... [
2007-07-16 22:34:28]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Museum of Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 01:54:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very nicely done Shari :)
hugs |
|
|
Re: Museum of Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 02:04:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| pretty write |
|
|
Re: Museum of Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 02:39:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
beautiful write that has made me sit and think on it, love the museum images, and what it represnts to me; im thinking art museum, though most museums have that effect on me, caught in time, life goes on... love how you ended it as well, made me think of my home as a museum and what will be remembered of me when im gone,
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
|
|
Re: Museum of Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 05:27:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This made me think of a museum of my own life and walking through it looking at everything I've ever said and done and hoping to find in the end that it was not all in vain. We can't change what has happened to us, but we can use it to grow and become who we want to. This is what your poem says to me.
By the way, I really liked it!
Dom |
|
|
Re: Museum of Time
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 09:31:36 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There is a struggle in life, I think, that creates the "art" in
our museum of time . And like the gallery's of modern
day, some of the art is beautiful, some sad, some angry and some
just too darn confusing to understand. But wow, what a metaphor,
Shari. This was brilliant. I hope that when the time comes to
"review" my art, that my museum is FILLED, with the larger percent
swaying to the good, happy and kind. :)
Lovely thought-provoking write, hun.
~Breezy |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
