|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
His Eyes
Contributed by
Thespia
on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:21:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
Hand in hand,
by the babbling brook,
gazing at the stars
in the cloudless sky.
Reflected in his eyes I see
oceans of vast eternity.
Shimmering in perfect blue and gold,
a story of another world
waiting to be told.
Wisdom of beyond his years,
mixes with his pain and fears.
That faraway gaze,
he’s wishing the rain again,
with its misty haze.
I loose myself in those eyes
too deep to live in,
like gazing into a volcanic fissure.
I witness oblivion.
A secret dark age,
beats inside
as he lowers his gaze,
smiling at me.
I let my heart rejoice,
in his love and his pride.
The sparkling sky
I see in his eyes,
and I weep
as we lie down to sleep
and dream of a better day
when together,
we can just fade away.
Copyright ©
Thespia
... [
2007-07-16 02:21:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: His Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 11:32:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Exceptionally romantic Thespia. And so damn beautiful. If I could, I would lie
down inside this poem and dream the sweetest dreams.
There is as much to the words not spoken as the ones here on this page.
It's gorgeous how you captured such a beautiful and ethereal emotion while
gazing into the eyes of the one who holds your heart. I love this. :)
Too beautiful!
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: His Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 05:46:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Eyes are the windows to the soul its said. I believe this, and I think your poem reflects this also. You have used beautiful vivid descriptions, really brings this piece to life.
Take care,
Dom |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
