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Glad I died.
Contributed by
xnoybis
on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 03:13:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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This test that you try to impose
Who are you imposing?
Imposter.
The great reach of your grasp
Reaches just a little less
Than the grasp of your reach
Just keep reaching and you might just
Touch the only thing that you can trust
In this myriad you have constructed
This simple mask I have deconstructed
The benefits of these ashes
Always the first for con-crashes
This broken circle that you confide
Behind your shallow, money filled eyes
Toss me aside
And I will say
It's just another
average day
Take me aside
And tell me the lies
And I will say
I'm glad I died
Today.
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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2007-07-15 03:13:05]
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Re: Glad I died.
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by Nates_JrAT on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 09:24:12 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed how you wrote this. |
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Re: Glad I died.
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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Hmmm though the title sounds so sadly morbid, I did really enjoy the read. It had some life to it, some grit...then I get to the end and there it is again...
"I'm glad I died
Today"
Wow the finality in those words...that sadness...like all hope is lost. It just made me think hard on the feelings of one dying inside... Good write.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Glad I died.
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by Tot on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:13:16 AM AEST
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| I love the style that you used in writing this poem, not to mention that the poem itself is fantastic! Excellent write~Tot |
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