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Falling For You
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 06:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the darkness of the room
I could feel your presence
So close beside me
Yet so far from my touch
I wished to hold you tight
To gently touch on your hair
And kiss you lightly on the lips
I wished i could gather the courage
To tell you i have feelings for you
To tell i long to be in your arms
The lights were turned back on
And i was brought to reality
I looked at you
Not knowing what to do
What to do with my feelings
That moment i realised
I have really fallen in love with you
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2007-07-14 18:44:57]
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Re: Falling For You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:42:44 AM AEST
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| Sometimes these feelings that we all at one time or another have do come true. I wish you well with your love. bern |
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Re: Falling For You
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:24:13 PM AEST
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That moment i realised I have really fallen in love with you . . . I love this line . . .
What innosence, as though something a child feels but to shy to say when one has a crush on another, and so she just stares and dreams. A most lovely write . . .
Ben
thank you also for your lovely comment . . . |
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Re: Falling For You
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 06:55:21 PM AEST
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| Lovely write.A nice feeling, for sure |
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