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Between Friends
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:52:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When you are strong
and the world has you back
I will remember the tears between hearts.
I will remember the shadows
walks along shores
blistering truth We could afford.
We were illusive then...
Hidden in damages
learning hearts.
I was strong..
and held you..
it was nothing, as You set Us to wind....Vincent
[for you my friends]
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-07-14 12:52:53]
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Re: Between Friends
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by shelby on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:57:21 PM AEST
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What a lovely write Lane....... and yes you have always been strong and held my hands... held me close and from a distance for that is the person that you are and for that I love you!
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Michelle |
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Re: Between Friends
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:59:19 PM AEST
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so very touching
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: Between Friends
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 01:01:51 PM AEST
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Beautiful write. Gentle and soft...as your heart and soul seem to be. When I run away from here....can I stop by? *smiles*
Much peace, love and hugs...
Laura |
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Re: Between Friends
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 02:34:17 PM AEST
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| Yes very gentle and soft great write |
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Re: Between Friends
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by Bruce on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 05:11:58 PM AEST
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| Excellent wtite |
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Re: Between Friends
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by Nates_JrAT on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 09:18:33 AM AEST
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| This was very moving...lucky friends |
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Re: Between Friends
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 11:18:21 AM AEST
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& here is the cherry on top...
It seems just about everything I've
read here today has a common thread
of appreciation, love & friendship...
I want to bottle it & share w/ the world!
Today has reached official, "feel good",
status for me & for that, I thank you!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme |
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Re: Between Friends
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 11:52:27 AM AEST
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Wow Vincent. What a completely beautiful and altruistic write. Somehow it
tugs at the heartstrings like nothing before. It's too lovely, my friend.
I adore the third stanza, but the whole piece is magnificent. Writing
to be appreciated and adored. As is your friendship. One of a kind, you are.
gorgeous
~Breezy |
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Re: Between Friends
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:48:58 AM AEST
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this is beautiful:) it touches all who may read it with gentleness, and the friend that you are to all of us here:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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