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Hearts Entranced
Contributed by
drowningheart
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Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 07:03:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Alone, the calm waters of a river...
Night fell into a trance.
Silent echoes whisper, "Tonight -
A new romance."
Reflecting on the water's edge,
A pair of silhouettes
Cast shadows of her stare.
Unaware, alas, of love anew;
Two lives lived of solitaire,
Across the river's stream, did stare.
And on the moon, I laid a prayer
That gently rested there.
So I dove once more,
My heart in hand.
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drowningheart
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2007-07-14 07:03:19]
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Re: Hearts Entranced
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 07:28:10 AM AEST
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| I like the poem very much. Though I have no title for it..Good writing...Russ |
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Re: Hearts Entranced
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by shelby on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:49:06 AM AEST
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breath taking write..... two lives lived of solitaire, nice......
Loved the ending too geez I just love it all
Michelle |
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Re: Hearts Entranced
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by Crow on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:16:49 AM AEST
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Its way to earily to be breaking my heart!
lol!
"And on the moon, I laid a prayer
That gently rested there.
So I dove once more,
My heart in hand."
thats just awsome.. Vincent
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