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Help me Find You.
Contributed by
needledancing
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Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 10:45:48 AM in AEST
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If I were flower and you could pick me,
what flower would I be?
If I were country and you could live me,
what country would I be?
If I were water and you could drink me,
how pure would I be?
If I were blind and I could feel you,
what would you reveal to me?
If touch was all that I could find within your human soul,
would what I feel in your being to help make us all that's whole?
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Re: Help me Find You.
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 11:05:47 AM AEST
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The most fragrant of...
One w/o borders...
As if drank from my cupped hand over a river...
More than mere eyes can see...
ABSOLUTELY, SISTER!!!
Any more questions?*wink*
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Help me Find You.
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:23:44 PM AEST
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These questions can only be answered by the human that completes your inner soul. Nicley written.
sadaddy
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Re: Help me Find You.
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by funnyface09 on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:59:41 PM AEST
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i hope someday i could find the person who can answer all these questions for me..
hope you found yours already...
thanks for sharing..lovely write.. |
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Re: Help me Find You.
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 01:13:10 PM AEST
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Exquisite little right, my sister. Love those questions. Wise ones indeed.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Help me Find You.
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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Exquisite little write, my sister. Love those questions. Wise ones indeed.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Help me Find You.
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by Dom on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:29:41 AM AEST
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You can ask these questions, but the answer that is closest to the truth can normally be found inside our souls.
Wise, thought-provoking words dear ND.
And amazing how much impact such a short piece can have upon the mind.
Take care,
Dom |
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