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Love In the Waiting
Contributed by
rabbitpassion
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Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:20:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Love in the waiting
I wake up and stare out upon the sea
for it is another day and your not here with me
oh i can see you in all your splender
your smile is like the sunrise in early morn upon my eyes
your vioce is like heavenly music upon my ears
your laugh can raise my spirit, and make me soar
but you absence crushes my soul, and make me morn
I feel as if i can touch you but your just out of reach
I feel as if I can speak to you but waves deafen my speach
I feel as if you understand, but yet sea still calls and you must go
Oh how i dread the sea, and its demands
for my life is running short, and my time nears its end
how can i comfort you ,from the beyound
how will I get to tell you these word of mine, after i am gone
how will you feel my love, when my body is no more
I live today becuase i have today but tommorrow is unwritten
I love today for I have today and tommorrow may be forbidden
I am here today becuase God has permitted
By Alias Rabbit Passion
March 2007 (All rights Reserved)
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Re: Love In the Waiting
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:09:43 AM AEST
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A truly beautiful write,
I live today because I have today but tomorrow is unwritten...... what a strong line
our abscence crushes my soul but makes me mourn....... heartbreaking
Overall entire write sings.
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Re: Love In the Waiting
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by cutestmofo on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:18:13 AM AEST
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| really really like it great write read mine we in the same bout lol |
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