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In My Eyes
Contributed by
bruce
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Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 11:58:19 PM in AEST
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In My Eyes
In my eyes you are so beautiful
more than words can say
Not just in the way you look
but in every possible way
You dress to perfection
with a personality, like no other
I could go on and on
saying, one right after another
In my eyes, my precious love
you are everything in the world to me
You make my life complete
and as happy as can be
You give me what I need
in every way, shape and form
You create, within my body
my own private, electric storm
How lucky did I get
the day that I met you
Someone that I could love
The finest woman, I ever knew
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-07-12 23:58:19]
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 12:04:45 AM AEST
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Well Bruce, after what you shared with me via PM, I'm not
sure what to say, 'cept that this is stunningly beautiful and
so much more than any woman could hope to have written
for her ... you are a master at the romantic, my friend.
My favourite stanza is the forth. Just, wow! Amazing bit
of writing.
~Breezy |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 01:33:48 AM AEST
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a beautiful write!! such dedication and devotion.. a pasionate loving write.. great job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:31:40 AM AEST
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beautiful and breath taking Bruce
another amazing write |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:21:32 AM AEST
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Bruce,
do share.... did you find your lovely lady of your dreams now?? This poem is so lovely and if this is what is going on I am so happy for you. Noone deserves it more you are one heck of a guy and a friend. Best of wishes for love blooming forever more, sweetness with the sunrise and kisses in the moonlight.
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 03:28:55 AM AEST
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You sweet, sweet man....another beautiful write to your love. She must be smiling ear to ear at these...(makes me wish my husband wrote poetry) *smiles* Thank you for sharing...
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 07:27:20 AM AEST
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Lovely and thoughtful poem of the heart in all it's romantic beauty . . . Nicely done Bruce.
Ben
thank you 4 your comment also. |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Crow on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 11:55:29 AM AEST
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| ahh! Bruce great words to a fine woman you honour, its easy to read this write, and a pleasure. Vincent |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by needledancing on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 12:53:23 PM AEST
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When love does come and love does know,
then sure the hearts life starts to flow.
So evident in these words above,
Alas the man has fell in love. So Grand. |
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