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Pain is allowed in my world
Contributed by
Lost4Ever1541
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I'm never enough,
never perfect enough to make you happy, never good enough to make you glad.
I don't cry enough to make you care or even try to understand. I
'm absolutely nobody in all your damn minds...
But the worst part of all, is i'm absolutely nobody in mine.
I stare at the mirror,
wanna crack it in half,
take the glass from the mirror,
cut myself and laugh. I
'm a nobody in the world,
just another stat,
just another depressed snotting girl,
the ones most call a brat.
I'm absolutely nobody,
and that's the way i wanna stay.
I'd rather be absolutely nobody,
than put myself on display.
I'm never good enough,
never made you proud.
I'm sorry for everyone that hurts,
but pain I am allowed.
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2003-03-01 22:40:00]
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Re: Pain is allowed in my world
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by HumGirl18 on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 02:09:03 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. I think it's almost normal for people to feel as if they're not good enough. It makes us stonger, I think. Maybe if we think we're good enough we won't strive to be something better and that way we wont grow. So, we have feelings of being inept to grow and become something better.
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Re: Pain is allowed in my world
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:48:33 PM AEST
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| just remember...your not crazy everyone else is...well that's wut i tell myself...lol...but anyways...good write, i loved it... |
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Re: Pain is allowed in my world
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by Jilli_bean on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 07:30:38 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write....this poem forces anyone who looks at it to think about themselves ..a lot more...whether it be good or bad..but keep writing...it keeps me sane...it will do the same for you . |
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Re: Pain is allowed in my world
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by Jilli_bean on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 07:31:56 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write....this poem forces anyone who looks at it to think about themselves ..a lot more...whether it be good or bad..but keep writing...it keeps me sane...it will do the same for you . |
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Re: Pain is allowed in my world
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 05:51:05 PM AEST
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I often think of myself like I think of my boat.
It's not the best boat in the fleet (it's not the worst)
We don't win any races (but we don't come last)
Whichever course we set we don't seem to gain much advantage (sometimes we lose a few places)
But what the hell, we enjoy it. |
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