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A Penny For Your Thoughts . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:21:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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"A penny for your thoughts, "
my love
she asked of me,
and so i kissed her on her cheek
and whispered
quietly.
I shall tell thee all i know
of days and nights gone by,
when i was young and loved you so
and you were sweet and
shy.
A penny?
no that wouldn't do perhaps a dollar bill,
for every thing i feel for you
would reach the highest
hill.
No you keep the penny
for you my thoughts are free,
much more than that i'd owe to you
just for loving
me.
"A penny for your thoughts",
my love said with a smile,
i gently took her in my arms and held her
for
awhile.
The same way that i held her
that night on cape cod bay,
making love upon the shore
until the light of
day.
" A penny for your thoughts,"
my love said teasingly, with that smile
that drove me wild along with melting
me.
Let's go to bed i softly said
with you
i'll take my time,
to hell with pennies and a thought
we'll read each other's
mind.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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2007-07-12 01:21:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Penny For Your Thoughts . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:46:24 AM AEST (User
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aww this is simply beautiful.. another beautiful lovely dedicated write.. fabulous
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: A Penny For Your Thoughts . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 04:18:21 AM AEST (User
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OMG Ben, How do you do this...write these beautiful words...they just seem to come to you so very easily. I loved the entire write as always but that last stanza just sizzled. *you the man*
Much peace, love and hugs,
Sister Laura (hee hee I sound like a nun LMAO) |
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Re: A Penny For Your Thoughts . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 07:44:33 AM AEST (User
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" A penny for your thoughts,
a nickle for a kiss...
dime if you tell me that you love me."~?Dionne?
Best 16 cents you ever spent, huh? *wink*
Great job...for a caveman...teehee
~misfitme |
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Re: A Penny For Your Thoughts . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful and it dances across the readers heart as pure angel dust of love. Splendid and the smoothest love song I have ever heard. |
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Re: A Penny For Your Thoughts . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bruce on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 11:56:28 PM AEST (User
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I real beauty Ben. |
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