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Yearning
Contributed by
wizard
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Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:02:04 PM in AEST
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Sweetness hasn’t often graced my soul
Nor are angels common to my eye,
Stars have not adorned my night
Nor has the sun shone in my sky.
My muse has never held my hand
Nor was there ever one to try
To heal my weeping frigid heart
With the whisper of her warming sigh.
Not a word has gone unwritten,
Not a page remains unfilled…
Not a thought of love unbroken;
Not a dream has been fulfilled.
So many nights without slumber,
So many hopes carelessly spilled.
So many broken dreaming days
Without a glint of love instilled.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2007-07-11 13:02:04]
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Re: Yearning
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:17:06 PM AEST
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wow this is really like insightful and wise and i loved the flow of it .. eloquently written..
Rock on,
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Yearning
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:27:53 PM AEST
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wow wiz are you ok?
Kinda worry about you and your brother.
take care now i am just a Pm away.
hugs |
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Re: Yearning
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 01:33:43 PM AEST
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Your heart felt emotions of loneliness are felt in this write. May your heart once again feel peace and joy one day soon. Take care, young lady.
sadaddy |
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Re: Yearning
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 02:00:21 PM AEST
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So beautiful....so touching...I fell in love with the write.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Yearning
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by brew on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 10:32:28 PM AEST
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Hope all is ok in your life, sure missed your posts.....this write, was lead to beleive, something isnt totally ok with you or things around you. If you need an ear, I'll listen. Take care Paul....
brew~ |
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Re: Yearning
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 09:04:58 AM AEST
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I agree the sadness is there...but put so gently and smooth with flow of words.
It does reflect the lose of magic that love creates in hearts.
I can only hope for that magic to be ignited again soon. |
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Re: Yearning
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 11:58:23 AM AEST
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there's much to be read here, bro, between the lines , as it were
.. too much, I'm afraid, to adorn this comment of mine-
extraordinarily beautiful..and utterly painful~
damn..
B |
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Re: Yearning
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 02:11:23 PM AEST
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stunningly gently sad and sooo beautiful....
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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Re: Yearning
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 12:53:59 PM AEST
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Hey Wiz,
as always your words are eloquently penned and they touch the readers heart. Such depth and emotion poured onto the page.
I hope things look up for you real soon my friend. Take care.
many hugs,
dreamer
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Re: Yearning
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by LauraMary on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 06:58:02 AM AEST
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Completely beautiful.
You are just such an artist. |
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Re: Yearning
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by Sasha on
Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 10:42:58 AM AEST
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| This is perfect poetry, so well written and entirely captivating. |
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