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Deliver Me
Contributed by
needledancing
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Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 09:41:48 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Deliver me from suffering of man, Deliver me.
Deliver me from cruel and hateful hand. Deliver me.
For I must bare the hearts for which I stand. Deliver me.
I'm wasted now with all destruction of man. Deliver me.
If I could take a heart and make it whole. Deliver me.
If I could name a price and buy a soul. Deliver me.
If fragments of your being could be mine.Deliver me.
Then life as we do know it is devine. Deliver me.
If all the essence of our time on earth. Deliver me.
Is truly what is valued and of worth. Deliver me.
Then look to each and every face you see.Deliver me.
Know the you in you...is the you in me. Deliver me.
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Re: Deliver Me
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 09:56:30 AM AEST
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I started this reading to myself, then my lips started mouthing the words & by time I was half way through, I was sittin' a little taller & saying it out loud & what can I say...It Felt Good!
Might, I suggest that others try this, for truly it feels good...even get a little loud w/ it! It feels Great!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Deliver Me
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 10:55:26 AM AEST
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I agree with Kerry this is uplifting and boy did I need it....... thanks for the beautiful write
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Re: Deliver Me
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 11:41:27 AM AEST
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ditto what they said 19 times stronger.
A masterpeice for sure.
huggs, smiles, praise,
emy |
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Re: Deliver Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 12:02:56 PM AEST
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wow this is truly inspirational.. it is like a prayer that you wrote yourself. very beautiful and refreshing for one to read.. marvelous!!
rock on,
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Re: Deliver Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 02:51:07 PM AEST
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"Deliver Me" truly inspirational and uplifting words. I could feel myself really getting in to saying the words "Deliver Me" almost like a wonderful mantra. Excellent piece you've delivered once again.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Deliver Me
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:39:27 PM AEST
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| Super write |
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Re: Deliver Me
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 03:38:27 AM AEST
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The flow of words were smooth and easy. it's like a catchy song that gets into your mouth without any difficulty.
wonderful poem
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Re: Deliver Me
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 04:51:51 AM AEST
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Quite an exceptional noble peice of writting along with a most compassionate philosophy attached to it. as always well worth the reading.
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Re: Deliver Me
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 12:21:49 PM AEST
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| You bring beauty thru theses great words, thanks for the uplift, Keep writing, Hugs Valerie |
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Re: Deliver Me
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST
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| A Masterful flow....... |
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Re: Deliver Me
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by Dom on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 05:11:28 AM AEST
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A beautiful prayer or mantra that is ultimately uplifting. This poem emanates calm and balance. Inspiring words indeed,
Dom |
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Re: Deliver Me
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 02:37:18 PM AEST
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beautiful !
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