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Depth
Contributed by
Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I care not for
How Iam touched
Where Iam touched
When I am touched
I care for the thought of
Why I am touched
When Iam touched
By you
Copyright ©
Terry_Stephen_Driscoll
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2003-03-01 21:20:00]
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Re: Depth
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 07:46:17 PM AEST
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| excellent terry, short though to the point, how have you been? huggs and my best to you and yours, always nessa |
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Re: Depth
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:54:47 PM AEST
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OOOH!! You snuck this in..how sneaky of you!! I am glad to see that you posted it. I really like it..like I told ya, not really you're normal style of writing..but I really like it. Short and sweet but packs a big punch :)
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! |
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Re: Depth
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by vincy on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 02:59:51 PM AEST
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I like the clarity here.
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Re: Depth
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 06:19:11 AM AEST
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This is the first poem I've read all day, and I believe I'll not read better. This is very simple in the sense that only what needs to be said is said. It is extremely elocuent in the sense that all that is said... it all meant so much. To say so much with so little words requires great talent, and you pulled it off.
Take care,
David |
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