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Picture Perfect (I'll keep trying)

Contributed by sour_gurl67 on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 08:49:17 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Do you have any idea how picture perfect you are?
Do you have any idea, without even trying, you stole my heart?
And did you know, you're tearing it apart?
Do you have any idea how hard I tried not to fall inlove?
Do you have any clue at all latley, what has been going on with us?
I don't know who to trust!
What did I do? Have I made you cry?
Why are you angry? All I've done is try
In the best ways that I knew how...
I'm not the best at this kind of thing
but, I've given it my all cause I can truly say
that I've never wanted anything more in my life
and I'll continue to try
I've just been wondering why you're so upset
I know you've done some things that you must regret
at least I hope that's true, and I hope you still care
but how could you have lied to my face?
How could you even go there?
Are you ***** off at yourself?
Why are you putting the blame on me?
I think that I've went through enough
you're lucky this relationships still standing
You took everything I had, and I let you do it too
I guess that's just because of how much I love you
and that's why it's not fair, this could have been simple
but nothing comes easy with you...
and I guess I knew that too.

Copyright © sour_gurl67 ... [ 2007-07-10 20:49:17]
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Re: Picture Perfect (I'll keep trying) (User Rating: 1 )
by Ju1cy on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 07:28:46 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem! it ment something to me when i read it, u have a good talent! keep up the good writing!
Ju1cy

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