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Do You Feel Like A Man?
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:35:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You reach Back,
And let loose a hard Smack.
She falls to the Ground,
She cries and pleads on her way Down.
Do you feel like a real man now?
Does it feel good to hit her now?
She lays where she Fell,
He still wants to hurt Her,
That she can Tell.
She tries to crawl Away,
Just get Away,
Away from Him,
Away from the Pain.
Do you feel like a real man?
Do you feel good now?
He starts to give Chase,
But he stops in his Place.
There I Am,
Standing there between Them.
He will never hurt Her,
He will never hurt Again.
Do you feel good now?
Well its my turn Now,
Now you will feel real Pain.
I get her out of this Place,
Then I turn to Him,
His heart Races,
And He Screams.
You will never Hurt Again,
Not Her,
Not no One,
Ever.
That is my Mission,
That is my Curse,
That is my Purpose.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2007-07-10 15:35:28]
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Re: Do You Feel Like A Man?
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 05:07:39 AM AEST
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Re: Do You Feel Like A Man?
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 01:16:16 PM AEST
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loved it.....shows the truth in things like abuse of women from a mans view (a man that isnt abusing a woman that is).....I've written a poem from a womans view on this same subject.........its pathetic how many women are abused and dont fight back....luckily there are men out there like you who will fight for them
learning to know myself finally
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