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sitting in crop circles
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 05:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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we sit in our circle the beat it plays
trying to speak but words to hidden in haze
with great thought and spiritual release
just stuck on walls with two many beliefs
huddled cold but with no heat
the drum gets old buried in the street
the city fine in rich mans eyes
building their towers solid in the sky
walking the beat within a sullen trance
trying to forget all the other rants
sitting in tree's swinging on vines
writing with wood missing the line's
how to make sense is lost in me
another clone trying to be me
longing in wolfs clothes sitting in the pack
two many wolves i can sense there attack
disgusted in stares another freewill in their place
monsters in formthe can't even look at there face
dog dead tired and smelling like reign
such i lovely day so burdened with pain
but as the poor stay poor
and the greed kills the land
building your towers two one day touch god
slashing our tree's for the perfect log
the more we kill the less we feel inside
so murder your own everything must die
its not me who has to live with the lies
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lostrelic
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2007-07-10 05:31:36]
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Re: sitting in crop circles
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 06:19:45 AM AEST
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Right on, Relic. Right on. Your writing always makes a grand statement. This one spoke volumes. Well done as always, my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura (hippienurse) *smiles* |
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Re: sitting in crop circles
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 07:31:52 AM AEST
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| Good poem, but, WOW, is it that bad outside your circle? |
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