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Dameon

Contributed by xXdeadXpoetXx on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 11:25:01 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

You confuse me and you shun me
But I want to keep you close
Why am I attracted to
The one who's hurt the most?
And why do I keep chasing
The prey that I can't catch
Or why do I keep warming
An egg refused to hatch?
You call me like a whistle
I catch you like a train
But one that's oiled throughly
And I can't catch again
Here I am, I've asked you
To come clean with your life
I want to hear about it
The turmoil and the strife
I know that in the path of life
You've been thrown astray
But I promise I am here for you
At least just for today
I feel as if you're thinking
My patience's running thin
But will you tell me, baby
The trouble that you're in?

Copyright © xXdeadXpoetXx ... [ 2007-07-09 23:25:01]
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Re: Dameon (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 01:56:05 AM AEST
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Sounds like you're a great friend. One would be lucky to have you. I liked the write, it moved along nicely and your rhyming scheme was nice. I hope your friend one day can open up. Keeping things inside only leads to an eventual blow-up of some type or the other. You being there for him, might be all he needs at this moment in time.
Much peace,
Laura

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