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The Right Kind of Note
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 02:42:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I held the guitar in my hand
I don’t even know how to play one
I wish I could
Then I will be able to find the right note
The right note to tell you how badly I miss you
The note just to tell you I am sorry I love you
Tears were in my heart
When I walked away from you
Because I know you never love me
You never will love me
I was just too naïve to believe you will one day
And I know I need to walk away
Away with just a small memory of you
Kept inside my heart forever
As I continue to hold the guitar in my hand
Hoping you could someday hear the love note
Which I had tried so hard to play
And make you listen to it
One day, someday I hope
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funnyface09
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2007-07-09 14:42:14]
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Re: The Right Kind of Note
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by Bruce on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 04:22:00 PM AEST
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| A really beautiful note now write the song. |
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Re: The Right Kind of Note
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by blueeyedangel74 on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 07:26:30 PM AEST
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Bruce is right you need to write the song now.
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Re: The Right Kind of Note
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:02:41 AM AEST
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wow this is very heartfelt and sad.. you can feel the pain of the loss in this and the sadness.. this would be a good song. great job
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Re: The Right Kind of Note
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by MissMandy on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 02:13:44 PM AEST
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absolutely perfect.
i can't even tell you how many times i've felt this way.
keep writing.
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