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Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
Contributed by
needledancing
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Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 12:07:17 PM in AEST
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Oh inspiration ,wing my words with golded letter tips.
The words I wish to utter tangle in these aged lips.
The youthful pain of first time heart, being thrown into the dust.
The painful journey, twisted mind, rejected now intrust.
For tender hearts and youthful souls, be sought by lust of man.
Stealing timeless moments from their maiden ,is the plotted plan.
Golden nectar on their parts they fly with demon flight.
With no existing thoughts toward the maiden and her right.
Oh shed the pain of all who fall upon this plague of man.
Make the heartless jester be now flayed upon our land.
For every masculine to know that innocense has price.
A jilted golden maiden treasure, will not be that nice.
Oh hear us you with hunger for the rose of nectar femmes.
The we of us, who tend those long and thorny stems.
Your heart and hand will bleed on earth as long as women live.
Fathers of these wounded angels, rage on earth to give.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by sona on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 12:30:02 PM AEST
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a very sad poetry
very well written
goes straight to the heart
reminds us of misuse and female abuse
a must read
Quite heartfelt
keep writing such re inforcing poems
goodluck
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 01:42:11 PM AEST
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This write cut right through the soul.
You spoke so much with this beautiful written piece. The third line in the second stanza got me.... You spoke volumes on such a hurtful subject.
Michelle |
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 02:22:13 PM AEST
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ND, you always speak with a multitude of wisdom and
common sense, and always, ALWAYS with a gentle
temperament of thought.
This is such a difficult subject to tackle ... but you have
done justice to the pain and suffering that, not only the
victims endure, but those around them as well ..for all
things remarkable, there is equally something that torments
and breaks the heart ...
exceptional write
peace to you ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by allforyou on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 03:30:59 PM AEST
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(applauds)
beautifully crafted poem
very good word choice
there aren't many true poets out there. you are definitely one of them though.
-Kara |
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by Bruce on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 04:29:27 PM AEST
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| I agree with Breezy. Exceptional write. |
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 09:46:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful work ND as always the compassionate soul.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:08:58 AM AEST
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wow such sad wording but exquiste piece of poetry.. so eloquently written.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 05:15:44 AM AEST
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Excellent write. Stabs to the very core. Superbly written of the tragedies of what some women endure.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Steal Not The Innocense of Youth
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:02:18 PM AEST
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You have once again penned an excellent write, which is filled with sadness for lost innocence. May these innocence’s once again find the peace and joy with in their hearts one day.
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