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Commited Destiny . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 06:32:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I could have said i loved you
and held you in my arm's, hung around
for just awhile persuaded by your
charmes.
You could have used me to the hilt
like women did before,
break my heart then watch me wilt
scared forever
more.
I could have waited paitently
and then had sex with you, lying through my teeth
the way a lot of men would
do.
Because you were so beautiful
contrary to the ruel, you could've cheated on me
and played me for a
fool.
But in stead you love'd me
you tamed my very will, you knew i love'd you
so damn much another man i'd
KILL.
But you saw something in me
that a woman's born to
see, that thing that make's a women
called commited
destiny.
It wasn't merely beauty
or some sleasy quest for lust,
and better men i'm sure you knew
could've left me in the
dust.
I could have said i love'd you
your the answer to my dream,
make some kids then leave you with our marriage
in midstream.
Then you might have left me
it wouldn't be hard to do,
leaving me to bare the pain of geting over
you.
Yes all these things we might have done
in stead we fell in love, yet neither one of us believed
in someone up
above.
How
can it be?
i ask of me
two hearts
can love
so true,
i'd be a freaking nightmare
without the thought of
you.
To wake up every morning
and not see you lying there, growing old alone
thinking love was so
unfair.
We were more than just two people
soon in love to be,
we were what the angels called, commited
destiny.
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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2007-07-09 06:32:32]
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Re: Commited Destiny . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 06:39:04 AM AEST
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Wow, you made me cry again. Damn this was so honest. Believe me, I needed to read this. Some days I feel my self loosing faith, and then I read you and strength I do find, once again. Thank you, Ben for sharing this, really.
Much peace, love and hugs,
Laura (who always loves discovering what you have written) |
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Re: Commited Destiny . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 02:28:54 PM AEST
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Ben you never cease to amase me with this truth and pure love within your beautiful writes. Thanks for sharing
Michelle |
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Re: Commited Destiny . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 03:12:33 AM AEST
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another simply heartfelt dedication write.. you always write with such love and devotion. wonderful job.. so enchanting this is!!
vampyress Jenni |
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