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Just One More Shot

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 03:51:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Just one more shot and I’ll be out
No more pain no more thoughts
Drink it down swallow it hard
The sweet poison burns my throat

I can’t stand the room is spinning
But I’m content just where I’m sitting
You’re not there no thoughts of you at all
For the first time in a while I feel good

Just one more shot and I’ll be out
No more pain no more thoughts
Drink it down swallow it hard
It slithers so easily down my throat

I can’t see everything is blurry
But I’m content there’s nothing to see
I’ll stay here all night until the sun rises
I’ll leave when reality settles back in

Just one more shot and I’ll be out
No more pain no more thoughts
Drink it down swallow it hard
I can’t even taste it sliding down my throat

The morning sun shines my head is pounding
Slowly I rise my legs are feel weak
I guess I drank a little to much
But all I wanted was just to be numb




Copyright © CrimsonTears ... [ 2007-07-08 15:51:07]
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Re: Just One More Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by sona on Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 07:15:11 AM AEST
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I say you were absolutely write in saying the poem is not great.It is not great it is WONDERFUL
really enjoyed it
BRAVO!!!
Regards
sona


Re: Just One More Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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wow this gives the feeling of trying to block pain out with drinking.. never good but its well expressed.. this is a very good poem with a nice flow of words.. good job

Vampyress Jenni


Re: Just One More Shot (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 05:00:12 AM AEST
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Been there far too often ha... You really evoked the exact feeling of it, nicely done : )




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